Spaghetti

Walt: listen , remember , to what we hear punctuate.

Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner Um yummy mum make the best meat balls in the world " My sister remaker. I ate lots of spaghetti "hahaha" I laugh as my brother spill sauce all over his white shirt. You got sauce over your face to ", My sister added. I love when my mum make  Spaghetti.

                                                                My score is :10

Superhero on a Mission

There was a loud explosion coming from our school. “Ka-pam!” Doctor Weevil appeared out from nowhere . “Get some help Penny we are going to die”. “I know call  Flame, he can  save us” she . He has save a lot of people. If he can save those people then he can save  .

“Yes, you’re here! Can you help get Doctor Evil away from our school?”   “Run room 8 be very careful, he is very powerful” Flame told them. “Everyone, run for your lives Room 8 there is going  to explosion there is a bomb .

You need to be very careful”. Doctor Weevil  is a very

dangerous man.  Flame came to save the day.

After Flame saved the day I went home and had a good night .

It was bad damdeng to the hall intent world.

The next day doctor Weevil came from the school and got atered and the was happy after all they were so happy that they had to go and clebarte they had lots of when doctor was gone.

Hens

Problem Sovling

Movies

Walt : Identify where speech marks go in our writing .

Phil  asked mum are we going to the movies today it was the hoilday after all. First you need to tide your room and put the dich away and then we can go reilep mum phil worked like crazy to get dich  and clean his room. This is going to be the best day ever his burst with extied.

I think my score:4

Problem Sovling

Similes