I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.
One summer day there was a girl called Goldilocks and she was sitting on her swing in the backyard then she saw a rabbit come out of his house that was also in the backyard. And she went into the woods but Goldilocks saw a smaller house that
some bears lives in. House but she went into the bears house and saw some three bowl that were sitting on the table she has a taste of the first bear bowl an she said it was to hot but then she went to the next bowl and she has a little taste of it then she said it was too gooey and she went to the next
hi lishana cant wait to hear the ending of this story keep up the good work.
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