Thursday, 11 September 2014

the three bears and goldilocks

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.

The Three Bears - ProjectOne summer day there was a girl called Goldilocks and she was  sitting on her swing in the backyard then she saw a rabbit come  out of his house that was also in the backyard. And she went into  the woods but  Goldilocks  saw a smaller house that
some bears lives in. House but she went into the bears house and saw some three bowl that were sitting on the table  she  has a taste of the first   bear  bowl an she said it was to hot but then she went to the next bowl and she has a little taste of it then she said it was too gooey and she went to the next

1 comment:

  1. hi lishana cant wait to hear the ending of this story keep up the good work.