Walt: write diamante,, acrostic and haiku poems around a theme.
Diamante is a adjectives and a noun an it is a diamond.
It describethe title that you give it it describe what the person is talk about.
I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mr Wiseman.
Tuesday, 13 December 2016
Thursday, 8 December 2016
Verbs
Walt: Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
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The Egg In The Bottle
Walt:Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Wednesday, 7 December 2016
My syriah Eva lyi sorn lishana from Team 3 PES on Vimeo.
Walt:Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Game Animation
Walt:Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Tuesday, 6 December 2016
Lishana Science Animation
Lishana Sience Animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
Walt::Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Walt::Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Wednesday, 30 November 2016
Kawau Island
On the day we were about to leave school all of the year six had to wake up very early in the morning. We had to be there at 7:00am. But if we won’t there we would miss out in kawau lsland. So I woke up at 6:30 to get changed and have breakfast cornflakes.
All of my friends were and they started putting all of the bags in the buses. My mum went home and I said I loved her very much. So all of the kids and me went into the bus and it was very funny on the bus not. I went to sleep because I was tried. When we got then we just play and had some shower well I had a shower and Shelley had a shower too.
The next day all of the team woke up and went for a run up the confidence course was very painful. I was fun - when I went down a very steep hill. An when I got down back to camp I was very hungry. Katz group sets up the table for dinner. And guess what we had for dinner that night? We had chicken drumsticks an some gravy on top with vegetables.
Walt::Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Tuesday, 8 November 2016
States Of Water And How It Changes
Walt:Understand states of matter
List how water changes from different states
Thursday, 3 November 2016
Writing Test 2016
One day me an my friend called Kelly we though it was a good ideas to go camping in the bush. We drive to the bush to see what it was like an it was a pretty good place to camp. We had an idea to walk around to see if there any other people. There was nothing to see an no people around too.
An so we went to hunter for some food to eat cause it was nearly lunchtime so we went hunter an it was a good walk. And then we heard a big noise coming from a tree an we though we should going over there to see if there was food for us to eat. An of course there heap to eat so we went back to our camping spot to eat some yummy goat but of course we had to drag it back to our camping spot.
It was a very hard job to do but finally we got there in time to eat. So we stared eat an it was a very nice an yummy goat. But when we fishined. We went to sleep cause it was nearly night time. An so we went to sleep nice an calm. Then the next day we woke up in the nice sunny day light feel like something to eat for breakfast. We already had our breakfast with an it was cornflakes an it was a very nice breakfast.
While we were eating we heard a big noise coming from a house that was on the sea an I think it was a really big bear. But I think the bear was coming for us. And we ran so fast we could not stop run an when we were runing we were runing all the way home. Cause we new that the bush was not a very safe place to camping with so if I come to the bush again I beting bring a Flare Gun to use it whenever something really dangerous I can use the gun.
So we went home a had a cup of tea an my mum was there to make it for an as she was make it she told us that it was not a good idea to go in the bush.
Tuesday, 1 November 2016
Got lost in the forest
One day while I was walking through the woods.I met a lady called Kelly. San she a flare gun in her hand.and Kelly was very nice but had a strange . “I asked to her “do you have a husband?” and she said nothing “
When I got back to my camping spot and when we got there she to go an get some food for dinner. She went to go an get some food and when she got back she “ said this is just for me sorry. I had to go an look for my own food to eat. I was to tired to go an get some food.
So I went to sleep in my tent. When I got up Kelly was gone and I was very worried so I went to go an look for her. So I got up and went to get ready to go look for her. She was a very fast lady and so I had to run really fast to catch her.
I was running really really really fast so fast that I could fall. An so I find her anywhere I found her was a very dangerous place we could get hurt by heap of animals that could very bady hurt me and Kelly . So we ran really fast an we finally made it back to our camping spot an we did get.
So the next day we woke up an got ready to go home to our family. But when we were walking I though we got an has no where to go so we had to stay there forever an we never got home.
Friday, 14 October 2016
Tuesday, 11 October 2016
Thursday, 22 September 2016
Wednesday, 14 September 2016
Monday, 12 September 2016
Olympics Narrative
On a normal day Usain Bolt was wander around the Olympics Park where they sleep. An he woke up. He thought he might go for a walk to the beach.
So he went. He went long amount of time he use .Then he got lost at the beach. But when he got to the beach he thought he might have a little sleep. So he did have a sleep. But then he had another ideas he thought might ask Olympics Park.
Then he has another idea. He thought that he could use he phone to call some of his teammate. But they didn’t answer their phone. He triedy to call someone else. He thought he could he parents to see if they could fly over to Brazil to help him to find out when the Olympics Park.
But only one person could come over to brazil. His father came to see him so could help to know the Olympics Park was. So he came and went to the beach and find him just stand then ask foir directions.
The father knew when the Olympics Park was. So he took him to the Olympics Park.And when he got then he was laughing hard out. But he was happy that got back to the Park.But he was mad at himself to get back to the Olympics Park.
Wednesday, 7 September 2016
Olympics Narrative
On a normal day Usain Bolt was wander around the Olympics Park where they sleep. An he woke up. He thought he might go for a walk to the beach.
So he went. He went long amount of time he use .Then he got lost at the beach. But when he got to the beach he thought he might have a little sleep. So he did have a sleep. But then he had another ideas he thought might ask Olympics Park.
Then he has another idea. He thought that he could use he phone to call some of his teammate. But they didn’t answer their phone. He triedy to call someone else. He thought he could he parents to see if they could fly over to Brazil to help him to find out when the Olympics Park.
But only one person could come over to brazil. His father came to see him so could help to know the Olympics Park was. So he came and went to the beach and find him just stand then ask foir directions.
The father knew when the Olympics Park was. So he took him to the Olympics Park.And when he got then he was laughing hard out. But he was happy that got back to the Park.But he was mad at himself to get back to the Olympics Park.
Walt: Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment
Write a conclusion and say what it happened
Tuesday, 6 September 2016
Mighty Muscles
Walt: Explain and understand what muscle fatigue is
Find and use parts of text to accurately answer questions
Friday, 2 September 2016
Mighty Muscles
Walt: Find and use relevant parts of text to accurately answer |
Wednesday, 31 August 2016
Hiwi the kiwi
On Monday morning I woke up right when my Uncle Peter was awake Perry and Uncle Peter had breakfast . We had egg on toasted. It was very yumm’y and don’t ask if I am going to have a shower . I am having a shower so don’t won’t. Uncle Peter set everything up for the day. Then I got change into my clothes. We were go to Niue.
Then Uncle Peter went to have a shower right after he had set everything up and his said to me. That I have not touch anything on the boat and I didn’t touch anything on the boat and I was quite happy with myself.And guess what we were set off to go fishing.
Me and my Uncle Peter were enjoyed the air falling through us and it felt like heaven. Then my Uncle stop at a dead end in Niue . I was so scared that I was not go to make it home. I said to Uncle Peter “this is your fault for take us here and did you even know where we were going I bet you did you should be very happy with yourself”. Now I don’t know how I am going to get home . There was shore so we move to shore and I didn’t where I was. I said sorry to uncle peter for yell at you. Finally I got home back where I was supposed to be .
Monday, 29 August 2016
Friday, 26 August 2016
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Tuesday, 23 August 2016
Olympics sport
Start your writing here:
Did you know that gymnastics is an olympics sport .There are two different types of gymnastics you have artistic and rhythmic gymnastics artistic they need to have routines and they need to be perfect. Artistic and rhythmic gymnastics.
Artistic gymnastics is for women and men and rhythmic is only for women. They need to have flexibility in there so they can do tricks. You have to train hard to go to the olympics .
There are different event that you need to be good there are beam , bars , floor. They need to be very strong so they do gymnastics it is always important to be healthy. You could have lot of injuries you might not be allowed to compete in the olympics.
Gymnastics is a sort of exercises that you can use to come yourself healthy and you need lot of flexibility and energy to do this sort of stuff . And you need muclse to do this hope you have fun with gymnastics . I hope you don’t broken anything goodbye .
Monday, 15 August 2016
Friday, 12 August 2016
History of the Olympics
Have you heard about the Ancient Olympics games ?
It began in 776 BC in Olympia. There was only one event and that was the 200 yard dash. It was only men that were involved in this event they were competed nude-. The religious festival was held- for god zeus - every four years.
The Roman invaded Olympia in 393 AD.The games continued under the roman rule but were Germanic disrupted .The olympics stared back in 1896 and it was in Athens , Greece.
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Thursday, 11 August 2016
Wednesday, 10 August 2016
Dictagloss
Country that the bouts space olmypics must show they have the cahpy to hold the games and inevst there own money into them. Throw the infulx of touris the hosting country hope to gain more money join the Olympics .
In 2012 the olympics were in London UK it was the third time that London has held the Olympics 1908 and 1948. One of upstes was in shot put Valerie Adam calm the gold medal only after it was found that the bleurian oppnet had tested potive for durgs.
I think my score :8
I think my score :8
Tuesday, 9 August 2016
Wednesday, 3 August 2016
Dictagloss
2008 were held in Beijing , China it was the first time women could compter in boxing .Women Brunei Qatar Saudi Arabia were allowed to partied this was caseking the game in china was one of the most couter olympics in hirstroy .
Tuesday, 2 August 2016
Friday, 29 July 2016
Thursday, 7 July 2016
My real hero
A Hero is a person who protect and defend other . Hero also save people when they are in danger or when you need help.Fire Fighters , Nurses ,Doctors , Police officers, Ambulance, are all examples of everyday heroes.
My real life hero is my mum cause she is always there for me. She provides food and put its on the table for my family and I. She pay the bills for the whole family and she cleans the house. My mum had no circulation in her feet and she had a frozen shoulder so she can’t do much but she still does things for us.
My mum is a hero because she help me with my reading and maths .
Wednesday, 6 July 2016
Friday, 1 July 2016
Play Reflection
Walt:Use expression and fluency when reading out loud
Act in character
Monday, 27 June 2016
Spaghetti
Walt: listen , remember , to what we hear punctuate.
Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner Um yummy mum make the best meat balls in the world " My sister remaker. I ate lots of spaghetti "hahaha" I laugh as my brother spill sauce all over his white shirt. You got sauce over your face to ", My sister added. I love when my mum make Spaghetti.
My score is :10
Tuesday, 21 June 2016
Superhero on a Mission
There was a loud explosion coming from our school. “Ka-pam!” Doctor Weevil appeared out from nowhere . “Get some help Penny we are going to die”. “I know call Flame, he can save us” she . He has save a lot of people. If he can save those people then he can save .
“Yes, you’re here! Can you help get Doctor Evil away from our school?” “Run room 8 be very careful, he is very powerful” Flame told them. “Everyone, run for your lives Room 8 there is going to explosion there is a bomb .
You need to be very careful”. Doctor Weevil is a very
dangerous man. Flame came to save the day.
After Flame saved the day I went home and had a good night .
It was bad damdeng to the hall intent world.
The next day doctor Weevil came from the school and got atered and the was happy after all they were so happy that they had to go and clebarte they had lots of when doctor was gone.
Friday, 17 June 2016
Thursday, 16 June 2016
Tuesday, 14 June 2016
Movies
Walt : Identify where speech marks go in our writing .
Phil asked mum are we going to the movies today it was the hoilday after all. First you need to tide your room and put the dich away and then we can go reilep mum phil worked like crazy to get dich and clean his room. This is going to be the best day ever his burst with extied.
Phil asked mum are we going to the movies today it was the hoilday after all. First you need to tide your room and put the dich away and then we can go reilep mum phil worked like crazy to get dich and clean his room. This is going to be the best day ever his burst with extied.
I think my score:4
Friday, 3 June 2016
Tuesday, 31 May 2016
Describing SipdersMan
SpidersMan real is Peter Parker and he was beting by highly enhanced.He superpowers that includes strength , agility , spiders senses , scale buildings.. he help others people and he protect mankind
SpidersMan has a red and blues suit and he had a mask to keep his identity secret. And he love save people life and there a girl that he really like and her name is MJ and she is really pertty .
SpidersMan has a red and blues suit and he had a mask to keep his identity secret. And he love save people life and there a girl that he really like and her name is MJ and she is really pertty .
Friday, 27 May 2016
Thursday, 26 May 2016
Personification Dictagloss
The moon dance unop
ocean as if spot lighted stage the tried old shoes fell lslo at the back of the closet .the phone arlam seam , holed in still I fnaliy row out of bed.
My score was : 4
ocean as if spot lighted stage the tried old shoes fell lslo at the back of the closet .the phone arlam seam , holed in still I fnaliy row out of bed.
My score was : 4
Monday, 23 May 2016
Friday, 13 May 2016
Dictagloss
This term our topic is as I see it we are foucs on comic book comic are sometimes there are word, sequential , drimga and onomatopoeia .
my score is : 4
my score is : 4
Wednesday, 11 May 2016
Baking Comic Strip
Walt: Tell a story using pictures (comic strip) |
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
Tuesday, 15 March 2016
Treasure
Once there was a Pirate named captain James.He had a long beard and he was a very nasty man because he never cared for anyone and he made his enemies cross the plank. He liked to wear stripy clothes. His had a brother and sister coming with him on the boat. James didn't like his brother and sister because they were messy.
The next day they have woke up and had breakfast then went for ride and they find a island and Captain Hook thought there might be treasure on this island. They had find the treasure then they took it back to ship.
They had lunch and a little while captain hook was driving the ship and they got back home and love it there. They would go without there family
Monday, 14 March 2016
Derny Jones
Title Derny Jones
Captain morgan adams was a trend a pirate bend on knowing mayhem and have across the seven sea. But also enemies of brittany empire along with the crew when they came across Derny Jones loner.
Monday, 7 March 2016
Night Shine Army
Tlite Night shine army
Zack was extied but also carries what a night and shine army doing out in the midle of the forest. Let alone playing with dragrons did’nt he know that they were emeies atfer all saw he was up to something it was Zack jobs to find out . Out tiraia motive. My score out of 15 is:4
Friday, 4 March 2016
Marmites
Walt: Find out more interesting facts about Marmite
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- What is Marmite made of? Starts with yeast
- List one ingredient in Marmite and insert an image of what it looks like here
- After the Christchurch earthquake in 2011 the factory closed. When did it reopen again? 2013 March th23
5. What are three things you can eat Marmite with or on. Insert images here
6. Use the letters of Marmite to find out how many different words you can make from them mat mite rat it time
Wednesday, 2 March 2016
Tuesday, 1 March 2016
Monday, 29 February 2016
Narrative Wrting
It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.
Why the long face?” asked Johnson are you hungry.Byron replied nothing's but I am mad at my friends because they are been mean to me.
Do you want to go and get some ice cream Byron yes please Johnson said are you okay Byron repiled yes I’m okay .
Disappear
One there was a boy named Ben and was 10 years old who lived with his mum and dad .He was so excited for the first day of school he went to the hall to see what class he was in. He was going to be a years 6 this year .
He went to his class and they just play outside all day it was morning tea he went to his bag and he look inside his lunchbox and there was only a chip and bar. Went he came he ask mum and dad if they saw his sandwich and they said no .
The next day he went to school and his mum drop of . He went looking for the guys who stall his sandwich Ben did not find him. That same day his sandwich got stall again and his mum said that you need to find this boy anwise I will go to the and tell the teachers to find this boy .
The next day it happened again his mum said that this boy better for I come to his house . Ben replied do you know when this boy live down the road and I hate him because he is so sneak. He is so mean and nasty to people.
They went to the boy house down the road and said to him why do you kept on take my food at school it don’t nice and can you stop.
Dictagloss
Tilte strange thing Walt :Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
Something strange was happend first my mum, then my dad then my sister sun disperses it was my job to influence and to found the soulits .My score out of 10 is: 3
Tuesday, 23 February 2016
Monday, 22 February 2016
Mad Family
Title : Mad family
Max could see a family from a distance were at together through. The father was hell how could you forget the food?" . to which the mother reply," It was a honestly mistake I’m saw someone would us .
My score was 10
Friday, 19 February 2016
Narrative Writing
Once there was a boy name Ben. He and his family travelled to a forest that was never find. Ben heard a scared noise. He went back to the tent to tell his parents that he heard a mysterious noise.
Ben went back to the place where the noise came from. He saw a shadow coming from the tree. It was an old lady and she had been living in the woods for 10 years and she said that she was going to tell Ben me a stories about what happened to her.
My parents were dropping me off to school.And then after my mum didn't me to pick me up from school She and look pretty sad. Mum was at the hospital”. Ben asked “why is she at the hospital Then a few minutes after my mum died in the hospital room and that’s why I live in the forest told the old lady.
Thursday, 11 February 2016
The three little pigs
Walt: Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs
Wednesday, 10 February 2016
All About Me 2016
Walt : Share some information about ourselves
The Three Little Pigs
Walt: Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs
Here are some words that describe these character |
Tuesday, 9 February 2016
Lishana Marmites
- What is Marmite made of? Starts with yeast
- List one ingredient in Marmite and insert an image of what it looks like here
- After the Christchurch earthquake in 2011 the factory closed. When did it reopen again? 2013 March th23
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